by Patricia Fripp, CSP, CPAE
Emily Kimbell is
an older adventurer who bicycled across America and hiked
the Appalachian Trail. She asked me how to make her presentations
more exciting.
"How do you open now?" I asked.
"'As I rode my bike slowly into the campground...'" she replied. She
continued giving me her typical presentation until she got to a crucial
spot in her physical and emotional journey.
"Aha!," I said. I suggested putting her audience right in the middle of
her adventure, starting like this: "Imagine you are with me on that
September morning in 1999 as the gigantic boulder loomed ahead, blocking
the road..."
Then she should continue: "As I faced this boulder, I realized something
that you have probably realized. At some point you are going to run into
an obstacle. You can climb over it, go around it, or turn back. Your
company's boulder isn't literally in the road like mine was. Last year,
a major competitor confronted you in the market. " Then her adventures
becomes the story of the audience's. If she overcame her obstacles, they
can too.
Engage your audience immediately with a powerful, relevant
opening that includes THEM. For example, one of my favorites
is, "You have an awesome responsibility." Then fill in what
it is: increasing sales, reducing errors, cutting overhead,
whatever you are there to help your audience do. Another
excellent strategy is to research information on the company.
You can do that in conversations, reading their corporate
report, going to their website, checking their stock or
visiting one of their stores or buying one of their products.
Then you can say, "Congratulations on your company's recent
success," and describe it. Or "I love your new commercials."
Start by including your audience. Keep a high I/You ratio.
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Patricia
Fripp, CSP, CPAE is a San Francisco-based executive speech
coach, sales trainer, and award-winning professional speaker
on Change, Customer Service, Promoting Business, and Communication
Skills. She is the author of Get What You Want!, Make
It, SoYou Don't Have to Fake It!, and Past-President
of the National Speakers Association. She can be reached
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